Loneliness

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love that is very often found,

Only by those that know love

Never see love the way it was

En-tended to be. I do so hope

Love finds each of us, but

I know that this thing shall

Never happen to us the ones

Everyone laughs amongst

So I say to you friend do not

Say you love me, if not.

 

Reviews

[Samm]

And yet again, another very fine poem, how is it you can write so well. I really must know. I love this one just as much as the others. Loneliness should never be taken lightly. and if anyone thanks other wise I will be knocking on their door ASAP I am ready for battle you know? I really do want to know the secret to your writing. Its just so vivid and alive I feel as though I was actually talking to a lonely man, your not are you? I read the poem about the girl I liked it.


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[The DuchessPoet]

Thank you Cowboy for entering my contest!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

wow, intense,
I agree with Samm, loneliness should never be taken lightly
it is a great deal of our existance,
great write, xxxoo, mishel

[Helena]

So sad this write. Pulled at my heartstrings I must say my friend.
Thank you so much for sharing and submitting this to my "Loneliness"
contest.

Apologies for the delay in reviewing. I was overwhelmed with the
heaps of entries!

Helena :)

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Yeah, I can relate to this very much. I, myself, have never found love, but nonetheless I still really like this poem. You did an excellent job with this. It flowed excellently, and even though it sounded a bit like a rant, I must say it sounds so beautifully poetic. ^^ Great work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Disco writer]

Ah, another great write. I can tell we can expact great things from you. Very nice.

[folgers coffee]

I'm so sorry you feel this way, Is there anything I may do to help? I love the way you write. :)

[Love is forever]

Lonelness is the only true love there is nonother. I like this poem. You are a good writer.

[Kitty Forzaken]

very neat my friend!

I have to say the same thing at times-when needed

[(Blank)]

WOW, such a very powerful, touching saying I love it very nice write.


Jake