Death

Death

A Chapter by The Reverend, S. D. Blankenship DD. Ph. D.

See I told you no one would miss me, but you didn't

Understand. When I died I saw you you did not cry, though

I told you to miss me, you never did. I took the pill and waited

Changing, trying to heal. I never did. You knew I loved you, for

I told you everyday. Now I burn in hell for you to live so well.

Did you even care about me at all, you never came to stop me

Everyone, but you saw me fall.



© 2012 The Reverend, S. D. Blankenship DD. Ph. D.


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Deep and haunting but realistic feelings. It's like wanting to be a fly on the wall to see the repurcussions. Even though you may feel this person may not mourn, in time, it smacks one in the face. Great expression and your emotions made me almost tear up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Deep and haunting but realistic feelings. It's like wanting to be a fly on the wall to see the repurcussions. Even though you may feel this person may not mourn, in time, it smacks one in the face. Great expression and your emotions made me almost tear up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good, I love it, I feel like this all most all the time this is what I like reading about S.D great job

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. To keep on topic, to add such impact to your words, and still form the letters at the beginning....just wow! It's not easily done. Very well written. I don't even know what else to say except to simply offer you praise on a job well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Great, incredible expression. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I told you to miss me, you never did." I don't know why, but something about this line is just thought provoking. I have always wondered if the people who say they would miss you really would or if they would go on with their lives not caring. Overall, very good. Chilling, but good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

can't find words to describe how I feel about this masterpiece

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong words.
I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this one. We all feel like this. We all question "Who will miss me when I'm gone?" And what do they think.
This one gets to me particularly
"I told you to miss me, you never did. I took the pill and waited.
Changing, trying to heal. I never did."
I have been in the point of my life where the only thing I could think about was overdosing on something. And it's tough to get out of the grip of it. You never fully heal from it.

Also. I love how it spells "Suicide" excellent format (:

-Marie-

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I took the pill and waited
Changing, trying to heal. I never did"

Wow. That was breathtaking. I feel like you took the thoughts that flood my mind and just wrote them in the most sadly beautiful way. You made such incredible work of a short poem. I read this at least three times already. Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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