Loneliness

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love that is very often found,

Only by those that know love

Never see love the way it was

En-tended to be. I do so hope

Love finds each of us, but

I know that this thing shall

Never happen to us the ones

Everyone laughs amongst

So I say to you friend do not

Say you love me, if not.

 

Reviews

[Samm]

And yet again, another very fine poem, how is it you can write so well. I really must know. I love this one just as much as the others. Loneliness should never be taken lightly. and if anyone thanks other wise I will be knocking on their door ASAP I am ready for battle you know? I really do want to know the secret to your writing. Its just so vivid and alive I feel as though I was actually talking to a lonely man, your not are you? I read the poem about the girl I liked it.


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[closed]

Hm...Very nice. Your words are so true, love is a strong word. Very good write i like it ^_^

[FoolsGold23]

I can say love is defintely a pursuit, if not an all out chase. Grasping at quicksilver in vain, more like it, but I've also found, if you don't go looking for Love, love will soon seek you out. (Whether one wants it to or not) I did enjoy this poem though, short and sweet.
Nice Job!~Pyrite

[Sam the reader]

Wow, I love this writing. This is very true. I could not have worded it better.



Sam

[Mimozi]

Sometimes we are too cyncal to allow love to find us and sometimes we are so stuck in our own ideas of what love is and should be that we fail to notice its presence in our lives.
A very nice write, poignant.

[Leran Vakem]

Love is a word we gave to a deed, many think love is a feeling when it is something you have to work upon.

Nice work
Leran Vakem

[DRIVEN]

Love is a powerful word, it is a verb, and most people forget that... ...beginning with love of yourself. I liked this although the words bring that feeling of being without love to the reader, well done