My life

What can I say about it? That its so perfect that I can brag on and on about it? HAHAHAHAHAHA!! How funny...In fact, its quite the opposite...You see, growing up, I was always, picked on...laughed at...teased...made fun of....you name it....I've been through it....When I was born, my mother told me that I was born on the heavy side...From that day on...I knew my life was going to be nothing but hell...When I was in Elementary school, I was always made fun of because of my weight...At first I thought I was never going to make any friends...But...surprisingly I did...I have this one friend who I have known for over 10 years...I'm grateful for that...but as I started middle school...Some of my friends stopped talking to me for some strange reason....I have yet to figure out why....High school comes around....High school is around the time my smile slowly faded away....eventually it has died....its been dead for almost 2 years now due to a personal issue...I put on a fake smile sometimes to fool people so they don't have to worry about me...I started to like and love less and started hating more and more slowly each day...Who knows? Maybe one day my smile will return...just not at this moment...I usually try to make new friends...but everyone usually says something behind my back...I don't have a lot of friends now...but I'm grateful for the friends I have now...I would be completely lost withour them in my life...Thank you guys...for everything...

Author's Note

This is how part of my life is about, hope you like it (:

Reviews

[Sujash I. Purna]

this is very nicely written...is that poetry you meant when you said "I have this one friend who I have known for over 10 years"?
the pauses with three dots...made the writing sound like you are talking to someone...to some friends of yours...(look how I'm using your style here :P)...in a cosy lounge with butterbeers...who've gathered around to hear what you say...

This is a great writing indeed :)

[Robyn Rhiannon]

I think that overll this piece is good, but I do think that you could achieve the same effect as '...' using different punctuation. Sometimes you put the pause '...' in awkward places which interupts the flow without enhancing the overall effect of the piece if that makes sense. Sorry, I'm not very good at giving feedback, but I liked it (:

[DRLOVE]

I to felt the same way as a child, not fitting in for no reason is hard. Not knowing the reason why other people exclude you is heartbreaking. Great personal insight into a hurt child that grew up intelligently and learned to realize the small things in life.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the wise words at the end of the poem. We need to be thankful for good friends. Test of real friends are the one's who will stay in the bad and good times. I like the story. I believe hard to change who we are. Can't let the negative to slow us down. Thank you for the excellent story.
Coyote

[Nicole]

Friends are the most special gift a person can give. True friends last a lifetime and stand with you through the good times and bad. :) Really liked this one too!