Forbidden Love

Forbidden Love

A Poem by Becky Clancy

Many people believe in love at first sight

I'll admit, I have been through that once before in my life

You see a boy in your school that you like and instantly you fall for him

Yep, I've done that

But do I get the boy? No

Do you know why?

The reason is because to me, when I was little, I believed that boys only one thing

Looks

And nothing but looks

Whats the one thing I don't have?
Looks

Thats the one thing I don't have in my life

Do I wish to have it? I don't know

I do have some guy friends, but I never had a boyfriend in my life

Do I wish to have one? That a "I don'know thing" to

After several years have gone by in my life, everytime I see someone I like I always tell myself

Love is forbidden...it is always forbidden...

Just give it up...its forbidden in your life...

No one likes you...and they never will... 

© 2012 Becky Clancy


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Why the negative self image. No one should have right or invitation to describe your feelings nor define you. I've read your works. Love is not forbidden for you. You're quite capable of it, and some young fella will eventually see that. The only thing that should be forbidden to you is cynicism

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can total relate to this, but someone will come around who thinks ur beautiful. And plus, u never know if you never talk to that person and give them a chance to see how uniquw you are....yet again this is cxomingfrom someone who should take her own advice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful poem. Open the doors to many questions. Love is a special gift. I believe in lust at first glance. Love take friendship and time. Life had purposes for all things. Can't rush love. Kindness and a good heart will lead you to a good place. A strong and direct ending to the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the speaker in the poem lacks self- confidence.. :(

excellent poem :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I adore things written about forbidden love and yours is very intriguing. Definitely a different angle on it than I initially expected.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Becky Clancy
Becky Clancy

Viroqua, WI



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