Abandoned

This poem is about being lonely in life.

Abandoned by family and friends yet again 

leaving me alone yet again in life. 

Oh hate this loneliness kills me. 

That is when it all goes down hill 

Darkness bounds me tightly 

as everything gets bleak. 

Demons coming to the surface 

ones that I never knew existed. 

Voices screaming obscenities 

inside my head. 

Hatred towards mankind  no one 

is to to be spared they are all the same. 

A monster trying to escape and take 

me back to my former self. 

My heart tries to fight free 

but resistance is futile.

Abandoned by everyone who 

meant something to my in life. 

They all had a place in my heart 

every last one of them. 

Now I am all alone to fight the

demons that haunt me so. 

Why does everything  I love leave? 

If only I was not abandoned in life  

Reviews

[Luuucy]

Interesting, emotional poem. I'm seeing this cycle created: you are abandoned by those you loved, the loneliness brings about the darkness and bleakness, then the demons come out, the demons shut people out to protect you from the inevitable pain, and as a result you get continuously more lonely... that happiness and love is only temporary. I may just be seeing this in my own light as I can relate it to myself, and I also see cycles in everything, but I definitely feel the pain and the struggle.

[Lydia Shutter]

Feelings of being distressed and mistreated throughout this poem. The deep melancholy is palpable. Loneliness is a disease. Well written. Lydi**

[Ruth]

So saddening...yet abandonment can give us our perceptions in the world, good or bad, heavy or liberation...we have to remember we are on our own path, albeit a burdensome one at times...

[KittyKatgirl]

Wow this is beautiful and has a lot of emotion. But if this was written from your own personal experience I am sorry. And if you ever want to talk to someone I am always ready to lend an ear. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I will read more of your poems soon. Well deserved 100/100

[Curtis.Lenker]

Thank you so much your kind words mean a lot to me.

[KittyKatgirl]

You are very much welcome. :)

[RibhyMay]

This was such a moving poem, yet so very beautiful. Absolutely love your writing :)