Three Blind Mice

Acrostic Poetry

 

 

 

The blind lead the blind
Hastily making decisions
Rarely taking the time to
Examine the long term
Effects of their iron hand

Blindly
Leading
Ill-fated
Nations
Down roads of destruction

Manipulating situations that cause

Irreversible

Catastrophic
Events

       S e e   h o w   t h e y   r u n…

Author's Note

This is my first acrostic...

Reviews

[Michael X]

The blind lead the blind
Hastily making decisions
Rarely taking the time to
Examine the long term
Effects of their iron hand



The mataphorical perception with this writing is excellently conveyed in this regards, speaking our times,
one doesnt have to see the word: nation.. and still I think a majority of the readers would know what you mean in refrence to todays warring crisis, passionately enhanced acrostic design, i thought the ending put the fitting hitting nail on insight which reflects political angst, swat power and control, the idea of the blind leading the blind makes perfect sense in retrospect, considering how history repeats itself, Creative!

[Flow]

This is really good, i think bush should read it.. hmmm ok be nice flow. this read well i usually don't like this style but i liked this poem, nicely done :)

[Wanda S. Paryla]

For not being familiar with acrostics, I think you did a fine job!! I like this a lot, and did great at relating your observations and opinions. There is a spelling error in "Examine"... you just added an extra "e" at the beginning. Other than that, this is really good, and if you struggled with it at all, it doesn't show in the construction. Nice write!