Hold You Dear

When tragedy struck close.

Never in my life, would I dream of finding someone like you.

The smile you could produce, simply astonishing.
Piercing my shell of depression like rockets firing.

Your body moves with elegance and beauty,
Making me smile, like it was your sole duty.

Feelings blooming like flowers of Spring,
Piercing my heart with your humorous sting.

A simple date, a wondrous night,
Your dress of white blessing us with light.

Laughter, kisses and love.
Flying through the night, a pair of doves.

A horrifying screech, tears of sorrow.
That drunk driver, your life is not his it can't be borrowed.

That amazing dress,
A beautiful red mess.

I love you no matter where you'll be,
Please just.... Don't leave me.

Pause.
"I'll clean the house, I'll walk the dog.
When you wake up and put your freezing feet on my legs, I wont kick or scream.
I'll go to your parents this year.
I wont argue about dinner, its whatever you want."
Play.

Our last moment, you hand is slipping,
Please don't go, I wont live with you missing.

Your smile, a single tear.
I'll love you forever, I hold you so dear.

I smile, a million tears.
I let you go, my greatest fears.

Never in my life, would I imagine losing someone like you.

Author's Note

I would love to hear how you felt when reading this, or even some other feedback would be extremely appreciated.

Reviews

[Rashi Jain]

A beautiful piece of art. So alluring!
This is so Lovely-
"I'll clean the house, I'll walk the dog.
When you wake up and put your freezing feet on my legs, I wont kick or scream.
I'll go to your parents this year.
I wont argue about dinner, its whatever you want."

[zunie frost]

This is really awesome poetry !!!!! So emotional .... Love reading it !!!! 100% ratings from me !!!!!

[PHFASCES]

"Your smile, a single tear.
I'll love your forever, I hold you so dear"

blown away by this poem. just curious, is meant to be "I'll love 'your' forever"?
Other than that it was an amazing poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Sam.

[Daydreaming]

Nope its supposed to be you forever :3 Thanks for finding that! Thanks for reading :)

[PHFASCES]

Any day bud.
Sam

[Briana Noël Manzan..]

It was so happy and hopeful and yay... and then it got so sad, so fast...
Kinda gave me an emotional shock.

[Daydreaming]

Mission accomplished ^.^

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem.
"Your smile, a single tear.
I'll love your forever, I hold you so dear."
The flow of the thoughts and wishes led to strong ending. Real love is never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[McBear]

I really like this. I really loved the feeling I got while reading this. A work of art!