Clouds

Clouds

A Poem by Daytonight
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A poem about clouds.

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Clouds
pillowy softness
hold me in their sway.

At times 
so big and fluffy
they seem like a 
large white comforter
laying soft upon the bed.

Other times
so thin and light
airy and just a whisp.

Yet if you follow
they will lead to a rainbow
with a pot of gold 
at the end.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Daytonight
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This poem so soft and airy just like the clouds you spoke of!! At times light and wispy, other times fluffy and white; clouds are so pretty, I love to watch them as they move across the sky!! How i wish I could travel with them. Such a lovely poem, wonderful!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Aaah, this is so sweet.
I like the lightness, the almost dream-like, limbo quality to it.
Nice work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem so soft and airy just like the clouds you spoke of!! At times light and wispy, other times fluffy and white; clouds are so pretty, I love to watch them as they move across the sky!! How i wish I could travel with them. Such a lovely poem, wonderful!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely poem. Nice work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sweet write, enjoyed the read:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww.. Lovely! Beautifully written and just wonderful! Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 29, 2011
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Tags: Nature, thoughts

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Daytonight
Daytonight

LA



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