The Lonely Night

The Lonely Night

A Poem by Daytonight
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A love poem.

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You pierced the inky darkness
swept away the black velvet curtain
lifted the smothering weight
of the lonely night.

Your sweet smile ignited a spark
your laughter encouraged the flame
feeling your silken caress sent it blazing
dispelling the lonely night.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Daytonight
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It's a lovely poem about the allurement of love. From the picture, there definitely is a romantic flame burning!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A stunning romantic piece :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is romantically beautiful, I will try and chat later busy time school hols lol. Love the poem so sweet and from the heart. Keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww... Beautiful read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow its awesome. i think i know how you feel,

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your writes offer me intriguing insight to your poetic soul. This is just another piece to that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another good poem drips from your pen. Bravo on another masterpiece for your collections of works which seems to grow nightly!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 26, 2011
Last Updated on July 26, 2011
Tags: Love, Romance, Personal, My own style

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Daytonight
Daytonight

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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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