Melt Me

A sensuous love poem.

My darling when you speak to me

I glow like the embers from a roaring fire

when you say sweet things to me

I melt all over the place.

 

Like butter on hot grits, an ear of corn,

or a fluffy baked potato.

I melt like the cheese in 

a hot grilled cheese sandwich.

The marrow of my bones spreads 

like the golden yellow 

of a sunny side up egg when busted

or the molten hot lava running down

the side of an erupting volcano

or the way hot brown gravy

flows over the side of mashed potatoes.

I melt like chocolate being heated slowly.

 

So speak to me my darling

whisper words in my ear

make me melt once again

with your sweet words.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

This is beautiful don't know which emotion evoked strongest passion or hunger as you mention mash and gravey lol. Oh to invoke such feelings in another as they melt into your arms and just let the loving flow, beautiful you really are a mistress of romance. Keep em' coming