Life's Book

Human life rules set by someone.
Of which birth & death,two important occasions.

These two important occasions,
Generally, humans are devoid of taking decisions.

But, phase between these two important occasions
are filled with choices, splendor and ambitions.

Its like crackers of different exhibition,
Some will burn splendidly
illuminating the whole sky,
Some will burn silently
why????????? sigh,
Some will dead before they burn
not even getting chance to try,
But in the end they are all ,
pray of darkness devouring vision.

So what is the use of this cracker phase
In the rule book.
Is it because birth and death hung by its hook.

Yes, cracker phase is an opportunity
Which decides birth's moments prosperity,
And death's moments cruelty........

Reviews

[Black Rose]

Amazingly penned! No one has control over death and birth but time in between this two stage is controlled by us. We can mould our life according to our wish and skills. But I have some doubt. Do we really control our lives, or it's just an illusion created by the same someone who created us.

[AcasualPawn]

Well had gone through humans or puppets & justice of god ...
So you sure know my answerread moreWell had gone through humans or puppets & justice of god ...
So you sure know my answer
.. Thankyou rose for passing by.. .

[EJ's Horror]

I think you've perfected it, Death, it makes me feel insignificent being a human lol, like that "galaxy song" by Eric Idle

[AcasualPawn]

Yep, we sure are in significant humans who once thought , we are centre of universe..



Thanks ejheather for passing by..

[Abraham George]

wow.
great idea and no other best way to express this and that flow of words are awesome.
keep writing.

[AcasualPawn]

I have seen people begging for death, but they lived, and lived worse than death... And many who die smiling and silently...

I think, how will i die...

[Carol Cashes]

"Is it because birth and death hung by its hook.

Yes, cracker phase is an opportunity
Which decides birth's moments prosperity,
And death's moments cruelty........"

This is honest to God truth. And I'm impressed with these piece, Just a casual PIG. It's not so deep that a mere plebeian like myself can't grasp, yet poetic enough to satisfy those whose thoughts run loftier than mine. Kudos.

[AcasualPawn]

I just wanted to express that.. The two most important choices of our life are not chosen by us..... Sounds familiar, yep like machine manufacter..

[Carol Cashes]

You did, and quite well.

[AcasualPawn]

I have seen people begging for death, but they lived, and lived worse than death... And many who die smiling and silently...

I think, how will i die...

[AcasualPawn]

I want silent death...

[Carol Cashes]

Personally, I don't wanna go at all. I made my husband promise to keep me alive at all costs - do not pull the plug - shove batteries up my a*s - whatever you gotta do until medical science catches up! I think he half believes me...in any case, he'll think about it.

[AcasualPawn]

Well, we will reach type0 race(human race) in 150-200 years........

Type6 race is god theoretically..

So best wishes for your fantasies..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

nicely penned..
keep it up!

[AcasualPawn]

Thank you wajiha

[Melissa Kester]

You have a great style of writing. I enjoyed this. It's so abrupt and full of truth. Great job.

[AcasualPawn]

Thankyou melissa

[EJ's Horror]

What were trying to say with "Some will ?Dead? before they burn" Other than that man, great job, I like how you sumurised how life and death is definate but the way we die is varied

[AcasualPawn]

It means some people like who died in early childhood, without seeing splendor of life

[AcasualPawn]

I think every occasion has choices which we can choose...... But the two most important occasions we don't have choices ............


I have seen people begging for death, but they lived, and lived worse than death... And many who die smiling and silently...

I think, how will i die...