I Wonder

Thoughts of a girl in love...?

A shiver runs down my spine

When you look me in the eye

Where did you acquire

That poise, I wonder?

 

A blush sweeps my face

When you kiss me on the lips

Where did you acquire

That passion, I wonder?

 

A heat fills my chest

When you nuzzle me on the neck

Where did you acquire

That gentleness, I wonder?

 

A doubt pins my heart

When I see on your cheek

A lipstick stain: Where did you acquire

That kiss, I wonder?

Author's Note

Just a simple poem:)
Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Very well written, we all, believe it or not, have those feelings you so aptly describe here even people much, much older than you Love, the emotion is with us always it never disappers we are born with the capasity to love and when we "pass-on" it goes to the grave with us Love is eternal!

[Amen_Poppies]

I love this... I love this... It's perfect and I love the repetition used... - Madelyn

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I don't know what else to say except that it describes love perfectly. I like the repetition at the end of every stanza that really ties it all together. And I agree with a couple of the reviewers before me--the last line is awesome!

[Sujash I. Purna]

enjoyed reading, you have a talent to depict Love. Keep it up!

[☯]

This poem is very lovely. But, the last line is definitely killer.
"A lipstick stain: Where did you acquire
That kiss, I wonder?"
This poem is humorous, and beautiful! Great job :)

[Darkbynight]

I love the last line!!! Likes seriously, just the whole idea of the poem is gorgeous! Just the taste of passion, of...romance? Hm...I don't know how to describe this, but it's very good! :D