Living

Living

A Poem by Karina Longo
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Silly lil' rhyming poem.

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I've been sitting forever
in the same place
Having different sights,
To the same colours,
At different sizes
What a trip, this is not LSD
It's just ME

I've been trying that mistake
Over and over again
I've been aging very well
since the rage remains
I've been using the words
I despised when I was a child
I've gained the right to be wrong
And I should confess
I've been practising it
For quite a while

I sell cliches and I do promise
They are perfectly memorable
Best to say what you already heard
Than overdose on the importance of being idle

Not all poems are pretty
Not all girls are bitchy
Not all boys will break your heart
But all the humanity shall follow one
little rule on the living path:

You'll never know what you'll get so far

© 2011 Karina Longo


Author's Note

Karina Longo
Silly little rhyming poem.

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The wordplay in this was very well done! Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's brilliant piece of work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was really good, I enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a good 'un Karina a lesson here that should be taken to heart by all Nice to see you writing again.

"Patches"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it, it seems very real. And I can understand everything clearly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Karina Longo
Karina Longo

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