Child of Fate

Child of Fate

A Poem by Omri F.K
"

a cursed deal with the devil forces a man into hell

"

anther 2 voices song (hence the I/he)

 

In this darkness, in it's wake

All the boundaries seem to break

I became what I hate

My hope came too late

 

[chorus]

I was tested and found impure

Your selfishness is hard to endure

Fallen angels and dark contracts

I/he tried so hard to justify his acts

 

Oh cruel destiny, Child of fate

You used my love as bait

You lured me into this old trap

Soul so lost without a map

 

In this hell I rule supreme

Your love is lost, I broke your dream

Welcome, stranger, to this dark hell

You will never hear the ring of a church's bell

 

[chorus]

 

In the darkness, this cursed night

Black clouds block the light

You sold your soul for hope so dire

Now you lie and burn in fire.

 

© 2009 Omri F.K


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WoW...this is a major piece of work..there was a spelling error where it says "All the boundaries seem to brake"
I think you meant "Break"...but other than that, if this is supposed to be a song,get a tune and make it go published! awesome work!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Omri F.K
Omri F.K

Ramat Gan, Israel



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