First Flight

First Flight

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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Poetry inspired by the photo of a butterfly.

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© 2011 Desert Dreamer


Author's Note

Desert Dreamer
Background image by PoppySilver.

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I read about butterflies all the time, the subject of many poems.
Now I have read one that has done poetic justice to this marvel .
Not to put down others, just think warming wings in morning sun
made all the difference. Gold dust is too, magic,
Sending children into flight is always in mind- love your work,
Rossen

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ah yes, I loved this one!
You created such a beautiful elegance to the butterfly.....truly amazing love!
xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I once saw a butterfly emerge from its cocoon. Your poem brought that memory back to me. It was a beautiful and awe inspiring sight to witness. Your poem is awesome too!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I read about butterflies all the time, the subject of many poems.
Now I have read one that has done poetic justice to this marvel .
Not to put down others, just think warming wings in morning sun
made all the difference. Gold dust is too, magic,
Sending children into flight is always in mind- love your work,
Rossen

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a neat thought and a wonder that happens a thousand times a day all over the world

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful pairing of metaphor and image. The first eager flight of an enlightened soul...reminds me of spring!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very creative, love the fact that you put an image to this writing. I also like the message. So little words yet leaves a big impact. Will be reading more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The end of the old brings forth new beginnings and that’s what I feel from this piece. Nice work well done and to PoppySilver great job on the pic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is such a beautiful longing voiced here... for butterflies and butterpeople too... Found a butterfly trapped in my office yesterday.. she let me hold her and release her into sunlit freedom. Sighed as she clung for moments before soaring.. Thank you for sharing your inspiration!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cancion de la Mariposa.
I actually watch them if I see them.
And they do seem very happy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how you have the words on the image...and your words so endearingly beautiful...wonderful read...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 23, 2011
Last Updated on January 25, 2011
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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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