I didn't mean it

I told you, harshly,

that december

Breaking nails on

windshields and

burning bushes

 

I don't want this.

 

You looked at me

wrinkle eyed and

flabbergasted

 

I could tell you were

always

taken aback

by my random insults

and instigations

 

Humorous yet, unfullfilling.

 

I was always a sad wrap

a seed in

the wind, blowing along

with the trash and inconsistencies.

 

Don't let me fall inlove with you,

it would be against my

own will.

 

And I always thought

you took that statement

for granted.

 

But who can ever tell?

Reviews

[Young Mountain]

I really enjoy your style of writing, It seems effortless.

"Don't let me fall in love with you,it would be against my own will"

I liked this line, it gave me the feeling of doubt.

Thanks for sharing

[Miss Coral]

Interesting thoughts in an interesting piece. Nice write.

[Sports Girl]

Wow nicely done i liked this a look

[Cynthia]

That's a very nice poem!

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Wow, simply wow...

I love the last paragraph, it keeps me wondering about their end...

[Candylove.]

I simply love this piece, it has so much to offer. I love the word choice and how you chose to express emotion in this.

Don't let me fall inlove with you,
it would be against my
own will.

EPIC. :)

[Robin]

a classic love story lays within these lines , perfect ending