Heart broken

 

 

 

I believed you because

 

it was beautiful

 

And I needed something sacred

 

to hold near.

 

...Don't flutter your wings, preparing to fly away...

 

 

 

I still need you here, please stay.

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Ah, the powerful needing of someone. This has a bittersweet quality to it yet it is very beautiful in its sadness. I rather hope this someone doesn't leave. Impressive poem, I think.

[Norma M Sutton]

very nice

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I love this! describes my life!

[Isolophobe]

I want to laugh because how awful I know this desire to be. I know it too well, far more than I want to. i'd pretty much copy this word for word and send it to her if I thought she'd stay. Perfectly done here, ol chum.

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

great poem!

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

short n sweet.. i love it!!

[nono]

Short but it has much emotion and so much beauty said in so little lines. You did a very nice job on this!

[Sports Girl]

Short but holds good amount of emotion. nicely done.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I'm begging for a loved one wasn't that easy u know?
especially if he/she tend to leave anyway.......

[Robin]

holding on to a moment , begging it doesnt slip away .