This Guy

This Guy

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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he doesn't even act like the other boys but I like it quite a bit.

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He’s like a girl with his body so lean

He’s not that tall, he has pale skin

Rather than deep and rough voice

His tone was smooth and clear, unlike the other boys

 

Cannot pretend, cannot deny

He’s the reason for this smile

In the past, he’s a friend

Now, he appears to me as a man

 

Surely, he’ll see right through me

When he nears me

I really fell in love with this dude.

What should I do?

 

He’s a very close companion of mine

Now he’s always on my mind.

Though this guy is a klutz

I love him so much

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
just ignore the grammar problems... ^^,

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You're in love girl, seems like it from the read and your emotions, so good luck :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


very cute.cuts right to the point

Posted 12 Years Ago


He's crazy, whatever... :p
Good poem.


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Desmund Tiny
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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