Beautiful Monster

They're human imitations...monsters in human form... but that lovely monster has a heart.

In the sun’s rays, I want to bask

But the light I desire burns me into ashes

I’m forever a prisoner of the dusk

For I am a creature living in darkness

 

 

Playing under the moonlight

They sparkle, those beautiful ruby eyes

Bewitched, this little prey, he cannot fight

Defying death, body cold as ice

 

 

Feeding in this liquefied life, I can’t resist

Each drop drives me crazy

Forevermore my kind will exist

With this bitter sweet immortality

 

 

This hunger keeps me up at night

The column of your neck I long to taste

My desire to caress you gives me a fright

And I am left in a flurry of haste

 

 

Poison running through my veins

A little kiss will be your death

I will make you hold your breath

I’ll bring you pleasure, I’ll make you insane

 

 

The smell of blood beneath your skin

My fangs slowly sink in silky flesh

Crimson stains are hidden in your black dress

And holding you in my arms is my greatest sin.

 

 

 

Author's Note

just ignore the grammars.
I wrote this poem because of my favorite manga and anime.......... ^^, yay

Reviews

[kathrina]

This is awesome.
I love anime and I love this poem :)

[no one]

very impress with ur poem

*Iove it* as I love anime.... you tell all I needed to hear before sleep, thanks! to make me alive into sleep now! :D love the occult words! darkness, and poison... keep it up! :) xx

[Leave me alone....]

Vampire Knight

[joshua deathdealer]

ha ha...I love this write. Every line played wonderful blood lust...xx

[heart of an angel]

i love the title , and the poem is very good i love it , it reminds me of my favorite show the vampire diaries and also the anime vampire knight love both of them, :) keep it up i would love to read more of your work

[C.A.Jordon]

It had good similes and metaphors I really felt the feeling from this poem.

you must be a vampire knight fan.

[Sweets]

This is awesomeeeeeee :)
LOVED the last stanzaa =3
esp the last line :)
Great great great work!

[emma]

really well written. the imagery was amazing and i loved it :) sometimes the rhyming's a bit off though....

[Larry Dyson]

try some non-rhyming prose..and think out the picture you want to paint in your mind ...words are just a different kind of Brush or Pencil...