My Angel

My Angel

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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When she's happy it makes me happy too

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Devoted heart is filled with jitters

As the moment becomes sweeter

Your sweet smiles indulged me

To a place not so far from reality

 

And yes, you are a real angel

Who saved me from the depths of Hell

When I’m with you, it feels like heaven
I wished this moment will never end

 

Nervousness swept me away

As you came to me and stayed

I feel like I’m floating in the air

As if I don’t have problems to care

 

After that I became so stiff

It’s like I’m in the end of a cliff

I’m confused with my own seriously

And it really drives me to my insanity

 

At that time, I couldn’t speak nor react

Because your simple hug has a big Impact

  

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I dedicate this poem to my two great friends ..... They inspired me...weeeeeeeeeee..... (~^3^~)

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Pax
nice and beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Super sweet!!! D-A-N-A!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ang galing naman nito.. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


That's so sweet :)
Your friends are so lucky to have you ! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh Wow this has a personal depth to it. Such a heartfelt write,
I can feel this tug on the heart. Wonderful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


so great of you to make a poem for them, beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Caring is when there are no words to define feeling... just pale approximations

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aww this is so sweet. ^^ Hurray! for your friends and very well done for your tribute to them. :D This is beautifully written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I enjoyed the positive and hopeful poem of friendship. Good friends allow us to show whom we really are. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


A great tribute to your friends! God knows we wouldn't be able to function properly without them. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 13, 2012
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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