I Hate it....

I Hate it....

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

I hate it because this happiness bring so much pain.....


I hate it when you stare

And how it leaves my mind so blank

I hate it, it is so unfair

Because I can’t even look back


I hate it when you tell your corny jokes

And how it drives me into endless laughs

I hate it when you are teasing me with your pokes

And suddenly left me in the rough


I hate when you talk to me

And how that voice makes my heart skip a beat

I hate it when it drives me into my insanity

And when I don’t hear it, I feel so incomplete


I hate it when you tap my head

And your fingers playing on my hair

I hate it when you are declaring the “FOREVER FRIENDS”

And how it spoils the mood in the air


I hate it when you smile that always surprise me

And how it makes my day so pretty

I hate it to accept it to my heart

The fact that I can only love you from a far


I wanted to be with you since long time ago

I hate it

Why it must be you?

I don’t get it…..



I really hate it because you’re the ONLY ONE who caused me so much CONFUSION……..





April 29,2012

4:30 pm


© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
Its been a year since I have decided to gave up on him but when he smiled at me that time.... I realized that I still have feelings for him......

I dedicate this to Mr. GREEN

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A very personal piece. Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

wonderful poem well done on this thanks for sharing with me

Posted 8 Years Ago

I can relate to this, since there was a time in my life where I was so confused about a similar situation...and I'm not even sure I've exited that confusion.
"I hate it to accept it to my heart" - that line is just so powerful for me.
I'll just shut up now XD
Awesome write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wanting the one we can't or shouldn't want is just plain misery. They either have no clue you REALLY exist or they just feel as though you're somebody that is just there...whenever they need an audience. The trials of wanting and never being noticed for who we really are... :) A wonderful piece of writing with wonderful thoughts throughout... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

And this tells everyone that moving on takes so much time...Haha! :p
Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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wow this is great! really great flow

Posted 8 Years Ago

I've missed your work plus I'm going through something similar so this defiantly hit home. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

It's horrible to not be able to be with someone you have feelings for, but you will usually move on.
Great poem.
Well written

Posted 8 Years Ago

Awwww. this was so sad!! i can relate. beautiful work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

:) i realize.. don't making promises.. GREAT WORK tiny :) XD

Posted 8 Years Ago

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