Thank You, Stranger

Thank You, Stranger

A Poem by Destinee
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Beauty, even at the brink of death

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 The night’s sky screamed suicide.
And I was its seemingly willing victim.
Two thousand feet up above the city lights
And I finally see why no one wanted to sleep.
It’s a shame I never noticed the beauty until now.
For a moment I raised my hands in protest. 
I didn’t want to leave, not when life can be beautiful.
But the wind pushed me closer to the edge.
It whispered in my ear words I always longed for
And I folded into its ghostly caress.
Everything happened so quickly.
Loss of balance. Loss of breath.
Your voice overcame the shrieking wind.
Quick, grab my hand. 
Let me save you.

And when your warm hand encompassed mine
I sighed— in relief and also in sadness.
See, you enraged the night.
It wanted me and it wouldn’t let you get in the way.
And it would have me, even if it had to take you too.
So I let you go, even though every fiber of my body
Wanted nothing more than to hold onto you forever.


So, thank you, Stranger,
For showing me that life can be beautiful
Even at the brink of death.

© 2009 Destinee


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So sad... but very intriguing. It brought me in. Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


very sad...but good...
Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a sad write
It is however well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such a sad and hauntingly beautiful write! It's a shame how so many will only find beauty in their last hours....

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2009

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