Hookers Wings

Another poem written late, tell me what you think! I tried having some sort of format with this one haha

Hookers Wings

 

She’s got the body of a hooker

And the face of an angel

You let your hormones take over

Wanna turn the good girl bad

 

Honey, behind that face

Is only bad

You think you ache now?

Wait a few more minutes

You’ll be bursting at the seams

 

You can’t corrupt the corrupted

She’s got tricks up her sleeves

And secrets under her clothes

Questions in her eyes

And answers outlining her lips

 

Sweetie, behind that smile

Is one big grin

You think she’s hard to resist now?

Wait a few more minutes

You’ll want to devour her

 

You can’t dominate the dominant

She has power over you

And strength in her petiteness

Landscapes in her curves

And heaven deep inside her

 

She’s got the body of a hooker

And the face of an angel

You let your hormones take over

Wanna try the good girl gone bad

Reviews

[Kes]

This is sassy and classy, and I love it. :P
"You can't dominate the dominant" is, I think, my favourite line. There's something kinda foreboding about it.
Great work. :)
K

[John Stussy]

This poem's got a wallop of attitude in it, but still retains its seductive feel. Quite a good poem, I'd say, you captured an irresistible good girl gone bad perfectly. Keep up the awesome work!

[Destinyxi]

Haha, most of my recent poems have that hint of attitude =P I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your reviews! =D

[John Stussy]

No problem, it was a pleasure reading your work. I hope to read more words from you.

[That_Girl]

This is awesome! One question though... in the second and fourth stanzas, are you adressing someone as Honey and Sweetie? If so, you'll need a comma after those words. Otherwise, they are fine. :) Loved it!!

[Destinyxi]

Corrected, thank you for your reviews! =D

[That_Girl]

Anytime!! :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Oh God yes. lol I love this. xx

[Destinyxi]

Haha glad you liked it :D thanks for your reviews :3