Dripping Petals

Strong language used

Dripping Petals

 

Are you lying to me?

Or am I lying to you?

Who’s lying to who?

 

I can’t take the bullshit

I can’t take any of it

You got something to say?

Say it to my damn face

 

You’re unsure of where were going

That’s fine

So am I

But don’t slap me in the face

And tell me you don’t know

Because I know

Oh, I know

I know it’s all a game

Checkmate b***h

I’m going to win

 

You think I’m going to be embarrassed

From showing you my body

Showing you what I’ve got

Flaunting it

Ah, babe

I saw your stuff too

And let me tell you

I’ve seen better

 

 

I can’t befriend your friends

You’re scared we won’t work out

Aw honey

We will work out all right

I’ll work you out till you’re f*****g dust

Gonna shove a stake through your heart

Pull it out

Meaningless pile of dusted vamp

Gonna slay the hell out of you

And every other blood sucking mother f****r

Who crosses my path

 

I’ll tell you if it’s going to work out

I’ll tell you if it’ll last

It’s all up to me, dick

All up to me

 

Try to hurt me with your words

I’ve got mine mastered

Want to mess with a writer?

Come at me, prick

I’ll cut you up with words

Then I’ll hammer your leftovers

You’re going to blend into the ground

Fertilizer for my flowers

 

Red

Dripping

Prickly

Roses

 

Ah, babe, don’t you like my garden? 

Author's Note

I know it's my second 'grrr' poem in 2 days, if I get repetitive, please let me know guys.

I had to write another poem, got angry, needed to vent. (Wanted to share it with you guys as well)

Reviews

[Bewitching Sensations]

Love the strong emotion and telling it as it is....

[Destinyxi]

haha thank you!

[KAOlmsted]

*LAUGH* Oh wow...I am literally high-fiving my monitor right now...so good on ya, lady. So f*****g good on ya. It's funny how they think they have all the power, isn't it? Foolish creatures. Silly little things. And you are spot on about messing with a writer...yeah...really good. Thank you so much for sharing this vent with us.

[Destinyxi]

Thank you so much for reading it and reviewing! Guys are quite foolish arent they?

[KAOlmsted]

poor things...

[Destinyxi]

Psh, serves them right

[David the writer]

Just sayin guys can be intellegent. Very sexist >.> XD

[KAOlmsted]

*laugh* Yes, we should have put up that disclaimer...every man except David the --what is that-- Writter?? ;-)

[Destinyxi]

Never said guys can't be intelligent, I'm only insulting one guy in this poem, don't see how it's sexist xD

[That_Girl]

O.O Imma stay on your good side, okay hun? ;) Well you succeeded in venting... the anger radiated off of every word. It was hot and fast and controlling... wonderful!

You show him how it goes, guys can't handle it.

[Destinyxi]

haha sounds good.

thank you! and no they can't handle it. Their dicks aren't as big as ours, wimps.

[That_Girl]

That's true, I mean, who can say they have an 11 incher hanging heavy besides us? No one. ;)

[Destinyxi]

exactly!

[That_Girl]

:)

[Crazy Cat Man]

My new favorite from yours. I laughed at the part when u wrote "ive seen better" lol. Everyone is so angry lately? Me, you, That-girl? Relationships are hard. At least we are writing good poems out of em.

[Destinyxi]

I made you laugh? I was HUMOROUS?! (please say yes haha)

Anger = awesome poems = good :D

[Crazy Cat Man]

Yes it made me laugh, great poem. Dont worrry if ur rhyming too much ill let u know ur being repetitive.

Yes anger makes awesome poems. Have u read my last 2 poems before my Batman poem? "Raping My Eardrums" and "Chivalry Is Dead"? Oooooh i was so pissed off at this girl i told her to shut the f**k up and leave me alone lol