After the evil has passed

After the evil has passed

A Poem by Dianne S Penfold
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A haiku

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Breathing heavily 
I walk alone in the rain, 
Tears roll down my face. 

© 2018 Dianne S Penfold


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Today I was start writing poem how I am lost at rainy woods. Which is my favorite place for outdoor. Short note poems can give more to our minds then they usually are. Our imagination start work up cause we want more. But just few readers can do that. I like your three lines cause breath is always something personal intimate. Tears are symbol just not for griev but also for relive . Climax in catarsy .

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's impressive when a writer uses so few words, yet a painter could create a detailed portrait of this image. Nice work... again, Dianne.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dianne S Penfold

6 Years Ago

Such kind words. Thank you so much. I would have never thought of painting this image but you've jus.. read more
A powerful message conveyed in so little words. It's nice seeing others write Haikus, as it enables us to hear so much from one person in as few words as possible while still being a beautiful thing to read. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dianne S Penfold

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment :)

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Added on February 20, 2018
Last Updated on February 20, 2018
Tags: haiku, alone, rain, tears

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Dianne S Penfold
Dianne S Penfold

United Kingdom



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I was born a writer, writing since I was a young child. I write poetry, short stories and I am writing my first novel. I love art, I love expressing myself through various mediums. I consider myself a.. more..

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