Confusion

Confusion

A Poem by Jordan Smith

Controlled by mixed emotions
Only to realize that you're not sure what you really want
Neglecting is your Brain
Feeling is your Heart
Unfortunately, you can't figure out which is right
Saddened by this, you
Isolate yourself
Only to realize your mistake of
Neglecting with your heart and feeling with your brain

© 2015 Jordan Smith


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Jordan Smith
Please comment below on what you think about this one. I really appreciate the feedback.

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Nice poem but I think the last sentence, it should be heart (not hear) ?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jordan Smith

8 Years Ago

That was a typo. My bad Lol :P
Shei

8 Years Ago

it happens to everyone :) it's still a great poem, many of us can relate
Jordan Smith

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it :) Thank You for the review

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Added on October 27, 2015
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Jordan Smith
Jordan Smith

Houston, TX



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"All our dreams come true if we have the courage to pursue them" -Walt Disney I am an aspiring sports play by play broadcaster who writes poetry on the side. Trying to get back into it after a long.. more..

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