Four Letter Commitment

Be sure to look for the only Letters that are capitalized in the first four stanzas in the poem and see what it spells...

Last minutes before

your life changes,

you start getting anxious,

you wonder if what you

are about to do is right.

On the other side

of the room, you have

a stranger standing, walking

towards you on a carpet

full of dreams and

flower petals of promise.

Valentines fill your heart

like sugar plums

dance around in

your head

Everyone is watching in secret

from a distance, waiting

for that special moment

when you ask her

Will you marry me?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Nirvana]

Cool concept here. The spelling out of the primary emotion coupled with all of those other uncertainties/sense of nervousness perfectly encapsulates that feeling in itself. Good job with this one. Only thing I would change is the spelling of pedals to petals :)

[apersonfullofthoughts]

I thought this poem was really nice, well done.

[Anna]

Well done. Although I'm not usually one to read (or write) poems involving love, I appreciate this. I liked the image I saw while reading your words.

[Jordan Smith]

Thank You for that review :)