In the Next Chapter

His face, wrinkled, and wizened with time

Boy do I love that Grandpa of mine

He may be sicker, his hair may be going

But his eyes still sparkle, his wit's never slowing

He's looking older by the minute, he's leaving us fast

But one thing we can do

Is remember the past

Remember him strong, remember him sturdy

Remember his jokes, remember him burly

I look at him now

It makes me sad

But I remember him then

And It's not so bad

His voice may change, but the same is his laughter

And we'll see him again

In the next chapter

Reviews

[Mark]

I find your poem beautiful, special in its meaning as the ones we hold dearest pass all too soon. And while they may leave, you are quote correct in that we can remember them, in older better times. Because once their memories live in our heart, they do live on forever.and definitely " until the next chapter" .... Great sentiment expressed here!

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[KAOlmsted]

This made my soul smile...really sweet. Thank you so much for introducing us to your grandfather, and thank you for sharing your work with us.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank YOU for reading.

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure. Not for nothing, but...when I was (oh god) (I'm going to say it) your age (sorry *laugh*) nobody...and I mean NOBODY supported me and my writing...I was actually put down for doing it...I'm in my 40s now and able to live comfortably while writing full time, but I think, with some encouragement, I could have been doing it a lot sooner. You have talent. Broaden it. Work on it. Do NOT let it...get away from you. You're good.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you sooo soo much.

[KAOlmsted]

You are more than welcome. Just keep writing. This isn't smoke up your skirt...I am telling you...you have talent. I wouldn't say it if you didn't.

[LA Lorena]

Such a sweet and tender write sweetie, I love it! Enjoy those close to you while you have them, time goes too quickly, and so do our older loved ones.

[Annabelle Lee]

as I just rcently had to learn. thank you

[Frieda P]

This is such a wonderful tribute to your granddad, feel the warmth oozing off the page, he must be proud. Beautifully pen'd. Sweet read Annabelle.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh! This poem holds so much raw emotions and a very powerful message behind it. For me, it is like saying hold onto the wonderful memories that you share with your family because one day they won't no longer be here. It hurts deep down to lose someone so dear and close to heart. I know how it feels and I'm sure a lot of others can relate to losing someone close too. I did lose my grandfather maybe five years ago from Cancer. We slowly watched him suffer and lose his bright glow like when he always lit up the room when he walked in. Like you said, it's good to remember him in the past when he was the strongest and how happy he was. My grandfather was even happy when he was so weak and suffering. That's what hurt even more. Thank you for sharing this poem to bring memories of me and him back into my mind! :)

I love this part:

"His voice may change, but the same is his laughter
And we'll see him again
In the next chapter" --Yes, you may in that wonderful palace we call Heaven! :)

Side note: Amazing! Continue writing and posting your beautiful work.

Ashley Rivers-Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Annabelle Lee]

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're very welcome! :)

[Salar Majak]

awwwwww we all LOVE our grandpas!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope he gets better :( great write!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm sure he is so proud

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[CDseader]

Wow annie me love it!

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks

[skipperdeuce]

thank you baby

[Annabelle Lee]

miss that guy.

[Mic]

Such a beautiful work to honor a loved one. Very well done.

Excellent thought!

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you

[Pax]

what a beautiful tribute....he will be remembered in your heart....

[Annabelle Lee]

yes he will

[Baby Ricochet]

That was beautiful Annabelle.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you, every review means the world to me.