Aroma of Memory

Aroma of Memory

A Poem by Dominick

 

Aroma of Memory
A Poem by Dominick
 
A scent rolls over the curves
of my upper lip.
 
My eyelids shut instantly,
with a big inhale,
as a memory of you wafts past;
an aroma of pleasure.
 
My soul reaches out to you,
running fingers gently down your back;
a soft whisper.
 
A chill, a ringing in your ear;
all signs that someone is thinking of you.
I hope you feel my recollection.
 
 

© 2008 Dominick


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A lovely piece.

Original concept, to be wanting someone to experience the mythical sensations of being thought about by another. Nice details and imagery.

This is a pleasant read. Hope the person who received the email liked it too.
Thanks for posting this.


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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If words had a scent, then this is oder-rich. The mixture of senses is great: "I hope you feel my recollection"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sexy, sensuous without going overboard into saccharine or even graphic territory. You imbue the sense of the titles, the aroma of memory perfectly here. This reads like a sensuous tease...teasing our senses with evocative images that you hint and tease at. That works perfectly here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written, with some great lines. Great Write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is great! i love when a scent can bring back a memory. you summed up the feeling nicely! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A lovely piece.

Original concept, to be wanting someone to experience the mythical sensations of being thought about by another. Nice details and imagery.

This is a pleasant read. Hope the person who received the email liked it too.
Thanks for posting this.


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I really enjoyed this poem.

"My soul reaches out to you,
running fingers gently down your back;
a soft whisper."

So beautiful. Thank you.


Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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