Selfish

Selfish

A Poem by Cat
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Today I am officially 10 months and 14 days sober from my physical demons. How long has it been for you? A few hours? Or a few years? hope y'all enjoy my poem. Love and good thoughts, Cat

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SELFISH

for only thinking of me

SELFISH

 for wanting love for only me

SELFISH

for believing what he said was true

SELFISH

for wishing I wasn't here with the truth

SELFISH

 is what I have become

SELFISH

 only in my denial

SELFISH

for believing in  a heaven

SELFISH

for thinking I'm in Hell

SELFISH 

for wishing he was dead

SELFISH

 for wanting to hate him

SELFISH

 for knowing I can't

© 2013 Cat


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Cat
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Great poem! Absolutely loved it ! I love what you did what the poem to how you placed everything ! Not something you see people doing too often !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cat

7 Years Ago

Thank you SO much!
Sarah Lynn

7 Years Ago

You're Welcome !
It sounds very interesting and gives your states of selfishness along the journey of life.
Have you followed any style to write this piece?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cat

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I can't honestly say I followed a specific order or template. I have kinda developed it a.. read more
zainul

7 Years Ago

Don't feel sorry.
I enjoyed this and appreciate your playing with it.
Have a nice time ,.. read more
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i like this form of poem. i reading and he tell me story at just few words . there not any word wrong. its like breathing at the forest. thank you you also describe some my life expirience

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Cat

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :)

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Cat
Cat

Some Po-Dunk Town, IN



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*BE A BEAUTIFUL CREATURE* Hi guys! My name is Cat. I beleuve in equality for all. But, most importantly, I am a writer. I write mostly poetry, but I am also working on a verse novel. Ellen Hopkin.. more..

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