My Own Agony

My Own Agony

A Poem by DookieSmiles

When we first met she had a lot going on as did I. Hers was more finical mine was more substance but she ended up getting dragged into the substance with me. Eventually going our separate ways.

She's battling a duel with an imperceptible foe.
I couldn't spare you for I had my own evil presences.
I aggravated it and cut you further down.
I knew I didn't have the ability to love and keep you around.

She was in a better situation without me.
I'm a torment and poisonous that plagues her.
I stole her yang and left her with yin.
I carried her with me into a hazardous relationship.

Presently I understand my idiocy of my own agony I didn't see hers.
She sacrificed her self to attempt to save me.
She wore a blanket of flowers, finally coming to her senses.
She has turned the page to another chapter.

I Still watch over you, thankful for all that you've done.
treasure the great times we had for that is the thing that I adore.

© 2017 DookieSmiles

Author's Note

Not trying to rhyme.

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Added on January 16, 2017
Last Updated on January 16, 2017
Tags: Deep, relationship, guy, girl, boyfriend, girlfriend, sad, breakup



Kansas City, MO

Just a guy with a pen and paper. I'm new to poetry so take it easy on me 🤗 more..