Jealous of You

Jealous of You

A Poem by ~Dragon X
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Poem pretty loosely based on my own experiences.....You don't have to read it if you don't want to. o3o' Like really, it's just a venting of my emotions.

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This is my issue
I'm jealous of you.

You flip open your book
And tell me to look
I see works of art
Secret pain to my heart.


You recite to me a passage in Spanish memorized fluently
I nod, smile happily
Though within
The walls of my temperance grow thin.

You complain you're the youngest in class
Yet all other students you surpass.
Even me
Especially me.

I ignore the compliments received
For my art, they must be surely deceived
 I point them to the better art
With a bitter heart.

My memory's horrid....
My skills ill-fated...
My rhymes blighted....
My pains muted.....

But I will never tell you

This is my issue.

I'm jealous of you.

© 2012 ~Dragon X


Author's Note

~Dragon X
I went with a kind of different style when writing this. At least, in my opinion, it's a different style than what I usually write with.

You...don't have to review or read this if you don't want to...I'm even hesitant to send out RRs....I don't know how good this is.... This was pretty much just a venting of my emotions...it's sometimes what I do when I'm down or angry.

Maybe that's why it's a different style? I don't know. The poem wrote itself.

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Oh my gosh, I hate being jealous!!!!! It is so sucky! Great poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I feel you, but being jealous should be a factor to push you forward, regardless, liked it much

Posted 6 Years Ago


~Dragon X

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. :) I know that it should be something to push you forward, but unfortunate.. read more
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

don't be one of those!
*sigh* Envy...We all have to painfully go through it.
This is different. It's pure.
Pure emotion.
Lovely write, Dragon.

Posted 6 Years Ago


wow this pretty awesome! i love this! mind checking out my stuff?
thanks :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


love it =)

Posted 6 Years Ago


~Dragon X

6 Years Ago

Ah, thank you! :D I feel like I'm whining when I write stuff like this though....and post it...XD..... read more
Jeanelle

6 Years Ago

haha sometimes whining a little helps. At least your whining isn't annoying ;)
It's good, i know the feeling of there being a difference to writing with your heart and writing with your head... this is good, don't worry.

Posted 6 Years Ago


~Dragon X

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the thoughtful review. ^^
Aaaaaah. I KNOW MAN. This feeling is really upsetting. But it's not jealousy. It's envy. Jealousy is worse.

I know what you mean. I'm surrounded by bright and sparkling people who's abilities are sky high. It's like they have no limits. They solve the hardest Math problem with ease, can run a mile without breaking a sweat, recite paragraphs totally from memory. And I'm just there and smiling at them and saying what a good job they've done. Yet it really does hurt inside.

This poem truly described the feeling of envy. DON'T YOU DARE DELETE IT OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN; GOT IT MADAME?

*hugs you* Good job Sunny. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


~Dragon X

6 Years Ago

Hehe, thank you Sumayya...^^'....And....Why can't I delete it....? ;___; I feel like I whine when I .. read more

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Added on October 19, 2012
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