Blood Carnival

Blood Carnival

A Poem by ~Dragon X
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A poem about a carnival that's not what it seems.

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Carnival, carnival

I welcome, and chuckle

You to fest-ivities

With playgrounds, and candies

 

Come to me, and my home,

Come to me, free to roam,

Come to me, curious eyes,

Come to me, I’ve no lies

 

Spinning mer-ry go round,

Dancing lights, crack and sound

Cotton can-dy is fed

They wear stripes, white and red

 

Singing and

Dancing and

Playing and

Sheer obliv-iousness.

 

Close the gates, lock it all

Leave them be-hind the wall

Pink cotton, flecked with red

Of children, left for dead

 

My fingers, snatch children,

Pull them in, to my den

Can’t escape, my brutal

Humble Blood, Carnival

© 2013 ~Dragon X


Author's Note

~Dragon X
I did this for a poetry contest, and I have to turn this in by tomorrow. My friend's mom told me it was too creepy. o3o'

But...it's supposed to be creepy! ;3;

Anywho, any suggestions for improvement?

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Quite creepy. And since that's what you were going for, this is perfectly done! Remind me never to go to this guy's carnival.

Finally a piece from you, so that I can reward again with a 100!

Creepy job well done m'dear.





Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow.

Just. Wow.

Pshhh! Nothing can be too creepy. XD

You did an awesome job
I had a shiver run down my spine at the last stanza.

Amazing job well done, Dragon! :D
Lots of luck in the contest!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Summer'sBreeze

6 Years Ago

Btw, where can I buy a couple of tickets?

This is just the place Jazz and I would go XD
This is great! I loved it. I hope you win the contest. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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