Another Bowl

Pass                             

      another bowl          

                                  over

here.

             So I may

 forget

                               Who    I 

am. 

And 

             Kiss

                       Me

Until we

   cannot

            Remember

what

    We

Are.

Reviews

[Winchester Saltgunner]

this explains exactly how i feel when im baked loli am now and listening to skrillex its fuckn crazzzzzyyy

[QuietlyCrash]

Wow. I love this. It's just straight to the point and very powerful, very well penned.

[Luke Rawlings]

Very straight, blunt (no pun intended) and very strong. I love the poem, the feelings communicated are powerful. A very good write, well done.

[K.S.78]

Wonderful. Its honest, slightly gritty and relate-able.

[plainme]

I like the layout, it's a great way of visualising the chaotic feeling that may be caused by substances. I like it a lot, very clever structure and the layout really does the trick!

[Flutterby aish]

Amazing way of presenting......nice one!

[quinfinn]

okay, puff, puff, pass, damnit! awesome write!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Escapism, rendered clearly, harshly and without pity or remorse. It is left to the reader to understand "who" and "what"; that's as it should be, this reflection of shared moment for those to which it applies. Another enduring snapshot of surreal moments looking through finger-frames at a contemporary existence. Nicely done, Brooke.

[Lexi Villanueva]

Nice Structure and i love the pic

[Alisha Heistand]

Ver Nice. Great touch with the picture