Spend Me

My version of an afternoon delight... Revised version. Much improved I think.. I hope you enjoy!

Spend Me 

I see you…

worry clouding your eyes

crinkle lines etching your face,

girlish prancing becomes a shuffle

 your spirit flops around the house

 like a fish,

too long out of water… 

Come to me…

before you suffocate

look deeply into my eyes,

lines will be lifted by a knowing smile

within the depths of my embrace

your spirit can swim

warm, moist kisses

 will arch your posture

 into finer form… 

You are longing…

no longer will parts of you ache

you will be touched,

nebulous gaze will swirl 

hypnotic,

mind will quiet

as desire billows deep… 

My hands…

rough with experience

 bring a knowing tenderness,

cupping flesh

 nesting your soul,

penetrating deeper than any pain

potency will linger in my kiss,

lips caressing

applying love’s salve

along every curve of your body...

And you will know me…

I will withhold nothing back

giving all I find

receiving all you offer as well,

investing our winnings

into this melding,

pouring my very being into loving you

until … 

Transcended…

You know I am yours,

pulling back your hair

 eyes dizzy with satisfaction

your trembling shoulders lift,

you pet this wildness

knowing it will never tame,

revived and replenished

your once fading heart

flirting a steady beat

upon my heaving chest.

willing and waiting

to once again be

spent…

Reviews

[Chris]

Softly drawing... the tone sets your intent and builds the fire. The end arrives too soon... as they always do when its real.

[David Scott]

I have so many humorous responses to "ending to soon", but I am truthfully grateful for the kind intentions and the complimentary review Chris.
Thank you for stopping in today.

[Patricia]

Oh wow! This is so sensuous and sexy and absolutely lovely and did I mention WOW! Spent!

[David Scott]

Thank you for reading Patricia. It is good to be spent from time to time eh?

[Patricia]

It is, yes, I agree but not everyone can do it with just a poem my friend. LOL :)

[David Scott]

Ha! oops. Did I do that? ;) *blushing* (not).
Thank you again.

[Patricia]

:) Anytime LOL

[Robbie~xoxo~]

O....M....G...!

What a sweet seduction!..

I am definitely sure she was breathless in her afterglow...

Boy do you capture a smoldering moment...whew!

I must say, I'm inspired by the poem...wild at heart!

Well penned, my dearest friend!~xoxo~:)

[David Scott]

:) *Giant smile*
Yet she always seems ready for more... ;)
Thank you for the read, review and the "OMG". It means a lot from you.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear David... A poet's heart is sensitive to
desire ... beautifully penned. truly.. Pat

[David Scott]

:)
Then by that definition, I am a poet indeed! Ha.
Thank you for the review.

[Alani]

oh wow... this made me feel a little hot under the collar, honestly.
It's gorgeous and makes me long to be treated this way!

[David Scott]

It might just be air conditioning going bad... ;)
Thank you for reading.
Not my typical write, but I do go here from time to time.
You deserve to be treated this way I am sure. We all do.
I look forward to hearing your music.

[willweb]

This was a beautiful poem to read today. The desire and love were felt. I enjoyed this.

[David Scott]

Thank you for the review and for your comments...

[The Quill]

just fabulous :) you write beauty :) the selections of words and knitting them in imaginations is just amazing :) great poetry

[David Scott]

Thank you Mr. Quill. You are kind to me as well.

[MsJewel]

Wow! There is so beautifully sensual and romantic, with just the right amount of naughty to make it sizzle.

My favorite line:
And you will know me.
And you will be known by me…

So simple and yet...so romantic.

:) Julie

100/100 dizzy eyes and breathless sighs

[David Scott]

*blushing*
My first review of this poem and I'm feeling flushed myself.
Thank you very much for your complimentary review.