Lost

Written during 9th grade.

Have you ever tasted a cloud

so silky smooth,

you could breathe it in forever?

You see,

forever was just a word,

and I see now,

that I want to be lost.

Lost looking up

to a dark, midnight sky,

wispy feather clouds

surrounding pearl moon.

Then feeling the rain come in,

rain like the pouring,

and running down the hills

singing,

"I'm alive, I'm alive!"

With best ever friends,

making memories by the minute.

That's what I live for,

and I want to be lost.

Reviews

[Yaooooooo]

Why run away? I had to read your poem twice before i got the mood or the setting. At the end im still a little confuce by it. Is like you are embracing the night, but still runing away from it. So where is that you are running to, or why? Maybe im reading it wrong....
Thanks for sharing and keep it up....
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