|Vacant Body|

|Vacant Body|

A Poem by A.L.

Trying to have an emotion.

Is like battling a wall.

It’s like mind gaps of time or memories.

The medication won’t reprieve.

I would be unsettled and angry. 

But the substance flows in my veins.

So I sit here logically understanding. 

But also mentally combating the deal.

What an interesting place to be.

Surrounded in a sea.

Of my own emotion.

But oh you can’t touch.

Like a vacant body waiting for a seed.

A.L. 

© 2021 A.L.


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Hello my friend. When we are seeking nothing and wanting nothing. Hard to escape this place.
"Surrounded in a sea.
Of my own emotion.
But oh you can’t touch.
Like a vacant body waiting for a seed."
I did like the above lines. You said everything needed A.L. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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when emotions are battling logic, and our mind is the battlefield...nobody wins.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Welcome back, it’s good to see you posting again

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.L.

3 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I read this like how we welcome an addiction but the dream it promises is empty. Anyway it is a great write, masterfully done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like the myth of Tantalus. Such a condition can be a part of depression, or an effect of the medication used to treat it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello my friend. When we are seeking nothing and wanting nothing. Hard to escape this place.
"Surrounded in a sea.
Of my own emotion.
But oh you can’t touch.
Like a vacant body waiting for a seed."
I did like the above lines. You said everything needed A.L. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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