Love/Hate Relationship With Love

Do you ever have these moments where you love is great, then it sucks the next? I have.

Seeing her hair blow with the wind in the same pattern makes my face gleam.

The natural sunlight glowing on her face makes her smile much more attractive.

I wave.
I smile.

She strolls towards me.

One step at a time makes my heartbeat that much faster.

She’s now just ten feet away.

Five.

Three.

One.

Hello.

She smiles.

Instantaneously our eyes close.

Time is moving slowly.

This moment can last forever.

Our lips move closer and closer.

I almost taste her cherry chapstick.

I lie on my lips on her.

Time pressed play.

We embrace each other as fast as we can.

Her soft lips slowly touching mine.

As I let go, I now know what love feels like.

I open my eyes.

And there is nothing.

Nothing but air.

I’m alone.

Just another day dream.

Life. 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I open my eyes.
And there is nothing.
Nothing but air.
I’m alone.
Just another day dream.
Life."

I like this a lot and the closeness it gets us to dreams of life and in life, living, sharing and touching lives...Bravo..........

[John Duprey]

Thank you! I appreciate your comment and review! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ...:)....

[Haley C]

This is a great poem but I don't like the ending. Life. Why?

[John Duprey]

It makes for a great ending. Why not? :)

[Emily Louise Wroda]

Love love love this! It's so good you should keep up the work!