Here Goes...

Life after tragedy

Here it goes, and although I hope

against all hope

that I know how to wrote...

Every possibility seems to be ah-chance to splinter my personality 

damage to the nerves, ruined functionality

Slow slope and an oath broke 

morals stranded

drove wedges, gained sentences, lost friends for sentimental sentience

seems I should back step

clues like I lost myself and needed ah-map

Still steaming relentless grieving coal like organic dark smoke

seen it now seemingly believe-this how could I choke

Needed time to find what was first impossible

on the next verse used versatile 

since that version is spent 

and the serpents sense death

 I use common sense to second guess hurdles

I'm not done yet...

Author's Note

Write like your life depends on it
Someday...
It might

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like this....Like the use of "wrote" instead of "write" to further
the satirical nature of this.

Ah-nicely done....
verse, versatile, version...

ver-y nice.
j.

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Jacob. Hope all is well

[Jaffer]

Very word rich . Life goes in so many places here and there but I never give up. Nicely said.

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Jaffer.
True, never give up!

[Sami Khalil]

Our lives do change after tragedy. Hope all is well.

[Chase Dylan]

Had a rough go, but polished is the used.
Hope you are well, as well.
Tragedy shapes us, as does prosperity.
Thanks, friend.

[Sami Khalil]

All true and well articulated. All is well. Thank you kindly

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the dance of words and thoughts. You took the reader on a fun journey on writing and thinking. I believe, you must be insane to write and create. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Coyote Cowboy Poetry.
The best writers come closest to the line of insanity. Yet are able to return, to the delight of the sane, with mesmerizing stories of the beyond.