Past Pains

Past Pain (I bury my love for you but it will never be gone)

by Aristede Craig Jr. on Monday, November 23, 2009 at 9:14pm

dont fall for me this time wait,
wait until my fun is had,
i doubt its faith,
im just throwing down the pad,
you need cushing so i dont let you down rough,
its im ill to you dont get to close.......       too close.
i tell you this so i can have enough,
you can get enough space go ghost,
leave me before i you,
losing my feet on the ground
im floating past im out of  view
but how am i so well round? ,
rounded stuck in a circle again,
thinking im traveling through a maze,
when actually im pin,
pinned down to you you its amaze,
amazing you thought i was this perfect image,
i knew what i was at least i believe,
i knew i was thanking myself for giving,
but im not perfect and this idea i leave,
i left my heart for the one angel that i gave a s**t about,
and f**k im over it im over her im over it just the right amount,
write me down in your memory because im surely not forget,
forgetting im in prison, im in jail,
forever locked in the past im inject,
injected by the tale of my past inching by my tail
tailed i have been tailed all the way through my birthday,
birthdays hurt when i hear they are present,
presence of the torture i take,
taken by my favorite love poetry its present,
it can leave it can ease away sometime,
sometimes it stays only late if i search,
by it im hit constantly in eye,
my eyes see more when its at work,
so you see, i could tell you that slow is the only way im take,
taking my new angel i cant take pain like i use too,
im a image that i see everyday i wake,
but im always asleep beside you.......

old words that followed the poem :
By:Doop Edetsira "you could understand but ha let me guess it's beneath you"
" dont see me listen to me" "lesbian girl could have been my only angel in this world" Quote me oh wait got it already....ps:deside if you can love before you love me if not watch the way you rub me" dont leave a impression hahaha mad laughter i never got to talk to you up close like i wanted the first love letter i wrote to a angel is in ya possession i never was good at not falling to hard hahaha mad laughter we never went together ha i was sooo shy ok this time im done with you know these quote i will let them subside... if i cook all right now i wont have much to feed to my pain, if i go crazy right now i guess its a start im quite insane... i play with words that curse my brain heal my heart battle is faugt but it also changes sides and lets my pain rize, look in my eyes you see it ha these eyes are angel lue, and im diseased haha the irony poetry is ill bu to me the cure, i take my medicine but not everyday,i guess i cant blame it for leaving me sometimes it runs away

Author's Note

Just tell the emotions and opinions you have my structure is never really structured lol

Reviews

[Ruth]

Pain has to be explored! I love the fact that this is free form, as such love! Adds a surrealness to it that I admire :) Straight from the heart, no messing! Awesome!
xx

[.......]

i left my heart for the one angel that i gave a s**t about,
and f**k im over it im over her im over it just the right amount,

Loved the intensity of these words here.
I really enjoyed this write.
Love the strong write!

[TJ]

It's funny you talk about your lack of structure on this poem when this poem has the best structure thus far!! I hate giving short reviews but there isn't much to say about this one besides that This. Is. Good!
Keep it up