I Could Give It Life, but Am i Right too...

I Could Give It Life, but Am i Right too...

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

yall want the images to come to life use your life,

 you want pain to fight, you take it out in every word and corner it with beauty,

 as ugly tries to seduce me ,

 i realize its just a show ,

you just dont know.

 because you just go when its green right, but what if it never goes to greenlight, you waste your life red, scared; head,


 rude, to say but dead;

 cant really see the mood, you felt infront of you ,

 the pen strikes the paper like a match but how many times do you; strike, out strike out strike,out
next up to bat is the living breathing body thinking it can control

 the soul,

 but the image you create is bold,

next up to bat is the living body thinking it can control the soul,

but it grows; within, sometimes they ask me to create these images in a vow ,

or to make there girlfriend say wow,

 did we just have sex ,

 because i been thinking now now now ,

 i want it.

 then they realise in his eyes they dont see the same words that i written;

 or spoke so its no joke or no laughter

as they end with this disaster ,

 "not love" oh what a disaster our love ,

 then your back and the image that is created is back back back; past, and in the present she is with the guy loving him.... i guess all images need life the amount could be cures or poison to them,the amount i put in is a blurrr when it becomes present when it is real, when it breathes life from me i could create a beautiful or ugly creation of them......

Edet Sira  Rambling Poet

© 2011 Aristede Craig Jr

Author's Note

Aristede Craig Jr
"its very simple really the control someone can have over a couple of people at a time and they can decide to break them or let them be free to live them ..."
Edet Sira Tis love is all ,,,,, enjoy

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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA

A lover striving to be lovely more..