Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

i write  but wonder why i do so.
 i love it can that seriously be a reason? 
i change daily and rearrange each season
so it snows when i cry and summer comes

fast enough to hide the tears i cried 
what am i ? 
who? 
lost images scrimmage for false spots in my head and lose 
i once was confused but when did i stop being confused 
i now light the fuse and await the time to blow up with you 
but im scared when fear should have died tues..... day wednesday thursday friday saturday sunday, reflection bounce of mirrors trying to show me;

 me, but what i see;

 is broken pieces that puzzle me, i try to put together  
something , but im use to saying nothing

 because at moments i feel nothing, im numb but then i feel you , a heart beat, climbing to me , flying to me because im going so high in a direction that most people arent pursuing, what am i doing? winning or losing? does it matter , if im loving does any of it get my attention,

 confliction, disappearance ,

 im hearing alot of what your saying then nothing, im in and out

 of God's mouth,

 his lips curl and spit me out ,

 and i hope im beautiful,

for he created me , but what am i?

who am i?

am i a image that could never be familiar

am i disease or cure,

a soul lost or found,

a ant making his home in a mound?

of dirt, a flirt, of the sex crazed brains of the humanity

in my brain?

a tease? at ease, able

to make women get on their knees, and beg

please please, i dont want to be ,

anything but that , i love to love can i be,

that, the real love you know the love that leave the human fearless,

truth is always acknowledged

maybe that is it

maybe

maybe thats,

Me

© 2011 Aristede Craig Jr


Author's Note

Aristede Craig Jr
I Know one thing im a lover

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Your one of the best people this world has to offer. A lover, a listener, a hand to friend, a poet who weaves a web undiminishing of his lfe, of his thoughts, so magestically it puts in awe any reader brave enough to see it. I love this peace, a great look to your mind, but you are much much more. =}

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh my! Hon, this took me to places! lol
A beautiful piece that has rendered me so moved! You have left no stone unturned in this search, the heart is visible and the soul immersed with quenching! Amazing!
xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my favorite line by far:

"his lips curl and spit me out"

it gave me an image of a sarcastic god. thank you for sharing!




Posted 8 Years Ago


A good poem about identity,well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


A confusion of words mirroring the confused soul. Very relateable. Very well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A truly wonderful masterpiece...I can say that your words are great here...Just excellent...100/100....
By the way, thanks for the review!
:)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your one of the best people this world has to offer. A lover, a listener, a hand to friend, a poet who weaves a web undiminishing of his lfe, of his thoughts, so magestically it puts in awe any reader brave enough to see it. I love this peace, a great look to your mind, but you are much much more. =}

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ur a magician. who creates magic with words. great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



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