The Real HER

Love it or Hate it...

I want Her

The Real Her

I want the best of Her

Even the worst of Her

I'll give everything and more to Her

When I see the world, I see Her

When I'm happy I only think of Her

If I need inspiration I think of Her

If I need someone to call it'll be Her

I want to go deep inside of Her

I want to be in the soul of Her

I'll spend eternity & more with Her

Forever after just me and Her

Glad I found Her,

THE REAL HER

Author's Note

I expanded this one by like three extra bars...

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Fab piece. What can I say. One part I might change is, 'I hope I'm in the soul of Her.' I would say instead, the way it's said seems out of place with the rest, but maybe something as, 'I long to be deep in the soul of her. The rest is great! :o)

@{/:o)

[MsJewel]

This is lovely - sweet and romantic.

:) Julie

[lovejulez03]

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It was just ...sweet and lovely to read!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Real love is accepting the good and the bad. I like the positive feel in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[maria ( rose)]

When I see the world, I see Her. Awww,, how lovely are those words. Awesome Poem Jack!!
-maria rose

[Sami Khalil]

Don't demand but the real deal. Fake is worthless. A powerful poem...:)..............

[wordman]

ahhh dedications for the one you love,can never go wrong with a love poem

[ashesonfire]

Aw, very nice poem! I like the dedication of the voice in this poem!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the feedback and I'd be greatful if you'd review my other works. :)

[abluehorseandflowers]

Nice. Two things I tripped over: all the I's and "think" back-to-back in lines 7 and 8.

[Kasey Miriam]

I really like this poem the flow is spot on. Very well done!