The Real HER

Love it or Hate it...

I want Her

The Real Her

I want the best of Her

Even the worst of Her

I'll give everything and more to Her

When I see the world, I see Her

When I'm happy I only think of Her

If I need inspiration I think of Her

If I need someone to call it'll be Her

I want to go deep inside of Her

I want to be in the soul of Her

I'll spend eternity & more with Her

Forever after just me and Her

Glad I found Her,

THE REAL HER

Author's Note

I expanded this one by like three extra bars...

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Fab piece. What can I say. One part I might change is, 'I hope I'm in the soul of Her.' I would say instead, the way it's said seems out of place with the rest, but maybe something as, 'I long to be deep in the soul of her. The rest is great! :o)

@{/:o)

[Craig2591]

Hmm... this could be seen as very deep love and devotion... or stalking. Nice write.

[s y e]

This is really good, it shows what you want and alot of determination. I loved the repetition of 'her'

A strong poem.

[ScoobyDooby]

when i read this i feel like im being yelled at when i come across the words "her" i dont know if thats the point but this is what im getting.

the last line "Glad I found HER, THE REAL HER" i would make two lines out of that.
"Glad I found HER,
THE REAL HER"

good poem though c: