Next

New Wave

Next one to the next one

Always on to the next one

Another guy in your bed

His moans fill your head

Deep desires take control

An appetite grew out of you

Only sex and drugs fulfills you

Different men you crave

Drugs have you enslaved

Highs, passion and pleasure,

Is all you want from it all

Man after man, pipe after pipe

You will never be fulfilled

Forever on to the next one

Forever on to the next dick 

Forever on to the next needle

Author's Note

Wrist Wrist Wrist

Reviews

[Kkay]

Frustration, disbelief. The subject is wasting life. Even though the subject's life is hard, it is also so mundane day after day. Choices are insane. The frustration one feels when they see this life is exquisitely maddening.

[Kasey Miriam]

One of your more powerful poems. It seeths with hurt. The emotion in the poem comes across clearly. Very well done!
I apologize that I haven't been around much. My inspiration and drive have been missing lately.
Glad I stopped by to read your work again. It is always well done.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for reviewing! Its okay, i must say the same for myself as i haven't been writing as much as i need to. I thank you again for the words, very relieving to me

[Jennie Baron]

Wow, really powerful, and I can't think of a better adjective than micky used, honest. And blunt. Some people are, sadly, in the place you describe, and it's awful for those who love them--or might, given a chance. Well done as always, mon ami.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanknyou for the review!! I don't know what mon ami means but i take it its good?

[Jennie Baron]

It means my friend, so that's good! :)

[micky]

Reminds me of an old.....beautiful piece...love the honesty
Well done

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you, I just read your poem "Breath" it is a beautiful poem.

[micky]

Thank you :}

[Jack Kennedy]

You're welcome!