Tears of joy

Uhhh I wrote this last night while sleeping and junk so yeah

Life begins with tears of joy

Tears from mother, tears from father

Tears from little newborn

Daugther

 

As we grow older, new tears form

Tears of sadness

Tears of anger

Still we have tears of joy

 

When we mature, tears do too

No more tears for silly things

like falling

And cutting your knee

 

Yes tears mature but they dont stop

Tears come for lost love

Or even lost life

Rarely ever is there of joy anymore

 

In the end they do come back

But it's like a cycle

So remember that while you have tears of sadness

Tears of joy arent far behind.

Author's Note

How is it?? Good or worst piece of shit you have ever read??

Reviews

[Mari-Sweet]

Lots of things bring tears to our eyes. Good poem.

[Shattered Dreams]

I don't know how to discribe my liking for this poem. It's not that I don't like it, I love it, but I can't put into words what I like about it.... So I'll just say that I love it because it won't be a lie.

[The Analog Kid]

Not bad. Using the theme of the "life-cycle" works well here.

[paradise]

wow i really liked this undertsand what you meant and loved how you put it togetehr exellent write :)

[trippy kitty]

This was good. There were a couple of small grammar and spelling mistakes, but with those aside this poem was well written. I could relate :)