PEACE

PEACE

A Poem by Elizabeth
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I know its short, Wanted to share... World peace is important...

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You solve your problems with guns and bombs
I give out free hugs and mow my parents lawn
You resort to drugs and violence
I bring home peace and silence


© 2012 Elizabeth


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excellent. Who needs pages of words when you can say it as succinctly as this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your peace is a very good one. Guns and bombs lead to more hate and destruction. I like the desire and goal of this excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem, straight to the point. Too bad showing kindness and caring wasn't the way of the world.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is short, but succinct, short and sweet you could say! :P
Scisenheart xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this very much if only there were peace all over the world, the world would be a better place

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This could really be used as a rally cry! I like it. Short, simple, and to the point.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Short but powerful. Well done Elizabeth.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 24, 2012
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