Dancing with the Moon - The End

The ending...

This night I love so much

Besides the cold breeze

You were here with me

That's all I ever want

The sounds of beauty weakened

I knew it was about to end

Feeling sad, I had to let you go

Yet you had to hold on tight

You told me to never let go

Because you promised me

"I will make us a portfolio

Full of our love so glee"

But I had to, I need to

I don't want to let go too

But I have so much in mind

If I get lost, it's you I can't find

Trapped in the vines of the trees

Mom and dad will get mad, I said

A situation like this, I can't run

Or else I would be dead

I want our love to shine like the sun

But I had to end this moonlight sonata

And go home with a guilty heart 

I'm sorry my love

Author's Note

I didn't do this to anyone. I don't even know how to.

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Good ending..good flow and glow.. xxxx

[PaperHearts]

Wow, a very tragic ending. I could feel the regret and loss in your words, and it made me sad to think that after such a vibrant scene in Part 1, it all had to come to an end in this poem. Although I personally liked Part 1 better, I thought this was also beautifully written, and that you perhaps reminded us all about the sad yet realistic nature of relationships. :) Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Legendary]

I did not expect this. :( Good job! :D

[Tracie Skarbo]

hmmm I didn't see this sad ending coming at all.

[Joe]

Nice conclusion!

[Coyote Poetry]

Second part love had to end? I read the poem a few times. You took me on a wild trip with your words. A very good poem. Made me think.
Coyote

[Abhinav]

haha...this part was better than the first.
loved both of them
keep writing!