back to the beginning

In the ancient days

we wandered through God's acres

nearer the sublime

than we ever imagined

 

your smile

was heaven to me

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

andrew zimmern on his show, "Bizarre Foods", always describes fresh water fish as tasting
of the waters and mud they came from. This poem feels like the Kentucky mud of grace
and residential, home-spun ingratiation of Gods purpose that it came from: to be human and
humble and to acknowledge the human and humble in others...

wonderful poem Ms/ Burns.. dana

[emmajoy]

Brilliant brevity .. few words, much said - and thought.

[Bec]

Short but very descriptive. I really like the last lines.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The beginning of any experience is always the most exciting part.

[Emily B]

and it still is

i stll believe in soulmates

[paul]

yes, then beginnings always end..

[Emily B]

yes, they do, but so do hangovers I hope

[paul]

they do too

[Southern Cross]

You can turn 2 words into an epic Em. Soft and tender like a breeze on a summer's day.

[J.M.B]

Nice Emily. Childhood?

[...]

. so true ...
. and so very beautiful ...
. it's amazing to read these words again after more than a year ...
. they're just timeless ... epic really ...

- serah